Re: Daily Mail: How just one joint could wreck your mental health
In article Blah writes:
>Ok, hands up, I read this poorly written bit:
>
>"Conditions resulting in the vitamin deficiency and its effects include
>chronic alcoholism,and severe malnutrition."
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>*as*
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>"and its effect include alcoholism"
Which proves you can't read.
The sentence CLEARLY says that chronic alcoholism and severe malnutrition are
two conditions that can result in the vitamin deficiency.
The subject of the sentence is:
Conditions resulting in the vitamin deficiency and its effects
The verb of the sentence is:
include
The object of the sentence is:
chronic alcoholism, and severe malnutrition.
Following the regular rules of grammar and sentence construction, the sentence
can be restated as:
Chronic alcoholism and severe malnutrition are two of the conditions that
can result in the vitamin deficiency and its effects.
-Pete Zakel
(phz@seeheader.nospam)
"You could get a new lease on life -- if only you didn't need the first
and last month in advance."
date: 4 Aug 2009 17:11:49 -0800
author: (Pete nospam Zakel)
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